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Post by sunbow on Jan 25, 2016 18:20:31 GMT -6
You can now read a bit: click free preview. It behaves a bit strange here, but click the blue. Let me know what you all think... <a href="<iframe type="text/html" width="336" height="550" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen style="max-width:100%" src=" read.amazon.com/kp/card?asin=B00OEZE0S0&preview=inline&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_ayRPwb14A7NEY" ></iframe> "><iframe type="text/html" allowfullscreen="" style="max-width:100%" src="https://read.amazon.com/kp/card?asin=B00OEZE0S0&preview=inline&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_ayRPwb14A7NEY" frameborder="0" height="550" width="336"></iframe> </a>
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Post by Deleted on Jan 25, 2016 21:37:37 GMT -6
You can now read a bit: click free preview. It behaves a bit strange here, but click the blue. Let me know what you all think... <a href="<iframe type="text/html" width="336" height="550" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen style="max-width:100%" src=" read.amazon.com/kp/card?asin=B00OEZE0S0&preview=inline&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_ayRPwb14A7NEY" ></iframe> "><iframe type="text/html" allowfullscreen="" style="max-width:100%" src="https://read.amazon.com/kp/card?asin=B00OEZE0S0&preview=inline&linkCode=kpe&ref_=cm_sw_r_kb_dp_ayRPwb14A7NEY" frameborder="0" height="550" width="336"></iframe> </a> I've read thus far, up to chapter 3, which is called "Intrigues", and I'm intrigued! I've never read "science fiction" because it moved at the "speed of light" and I couldn't keep up. . . maybe this one I can. May I ask when did you complete this?
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Post by sunbow on Jan 26, 2016 11:59:37 GMT -6
Thanks much for reading! I completed it two years ago (or so). Some of the beginning was re-written from 10 or more years ago, but as it progresses it transmutes. The beginning has elements which clearly tie it to science fiction, but as it progresses the supernatural and human elements become more involved. Message me if you want a deal on a print copy The kindle version is priced to be affordable and there is a kindle app which loads to any computer. I am very open to dialog about the content, here or through messaging. Thanks, Ron
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Post by Deleted on Jan 26, 2016 13:27:10 GMT -6
You're welcome! Thanks for Sharing! and please, stay open for discussion! I've got a lot on my "plate" right now (YOU know how that goes . . ), and 2 new "thick" books recently given to me (literally out of nowhere), but hey, I used to regularly read 3 books a week! Yes, I got that this book is going pretty "deep", and you and I have discussed deep subjects, so thus the question. When did you find the time to write this, my multi-talented friend??And it's a series?? The Sex was a little off-putting for me, but we all know I don't feel comfortable peeking into others' bedrooms, right? That's all that is . . I'm all for that type of "juicy" (oo, another of my accidental puns), but I mean as opposed to other bodily fluids. . . gore, blood. Ewwwwwwwwwwww, those spider things! But the way you depicted the "bodies" (some in torn paper gowns) being thrown into a "dumpster" by robots, and THEN came back and talked about your guy seeing the details (blood) on the security replay . . . perfect! For those of you that don't know, Sunbow was one of my very first fast-friends from Mufon, from when I "discovered ufo's" in 2007. He kindles my "Native Spirit". I love You, Sunbow! Your Peace is contagious!
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Post by sunbow on Jan 31, 2016 18:03:58 GMT -6
I am not sure I am interpreting your commentary, but I am just commenting on my thoughts.
Humans need a whole new view of sexuality. I believe it is perverted to think sex is just for reproduction. The vast majority of young people (think back to your teems and twenties) just have needs that will not be suppressed. The fact that we are breeding like lemmings and population is an exponential curve will adjust itself with a lot more real gore than I can deliver.
A naked human body is a reflection of the creator's brilliance. To watch a human take a gun and take another human's life is totally and absolutely obscene. Yet turn on cable and see what an average child of ten is watching: murderous acts as if that is a normal and accepted thing (just how life is).
I believe the sex in this book is several steps below graphic or standard erotic literature. I tried to remain tasteful. The telepathic can see into your mind, people's bedrooms are light-weight versions of what is in their minds. Before humans are ready for contact with higher spiritual entities, everything must be in the light of our consciousness. Not meaning public, but not hidden in the dark and pretending (lying) in denial.
Robots throwing bodies into a composter... Science Fiction, the dark mystery... I think you get enough in the preview to have a glimmer of the souls that are involved and really make the story. We are not these bodies we wear, but that is woven in the story...
BTW: The second book, 'Love, Dragons, and the Brilliant Machine' is written, but I am not finding the time to proof read it and send it forth. In truth, I think more people should read this one to start with, but both are complete stories and stand alone, even if completely related...
Thanks for being with us on this forum, jcurio... My peace and love be with you and yours....
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Post by Deleted on Feb 2, 2016 12:40:51 GMT -6
I am not sure I am interpreting your commentary, but I am just commenting on my thoughts. Humans need a whole new view of sexuality. I believe it is perverted to think sex is just for reproduction. The vast majority . . . Does anyone even think this way anymore?? (that sex is just for reproduction). LOL. My "telepathic/empathic abilities" say it just isn't so! My dear friend, my comments, tongue in cheek, were only presumed to heighten the general interest in viewing your preview, here on TEOR. I am sorry if they didn't "provoke" a few extra "hits". As for the notion of violence depicted SO MUCH MORE in our media, as opposed to a natural display of love, affection, and pleasure, I have often wondered the same. We live in a strange, strange, world. I'm sticking to non-fiction. For now. I don't wish to "protest too much", but you should know from your own experiences, that some people, like me, a "eureka!" moment in the brain, feels very much like the bodily big O.
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Post by sunbow on Feb 2, 2016 17:50:26 GMT -6
I like this and agree wholeheartedly I worry seriously why violence is so promoted and sex is so perverted. I might postulate it is to keep the masses living in fear based reality and subjected to being powerless, but something seems seriously wrong on this planet. I know we are told that the top 0.0000001 % are the most incredibly greedy and heartless of humans, but it still does not add up, because even then, would you subject your children to ruling over a wasteland. It just does not make sense. 'Love, Dharma, and the Galaxy' has many deep lessons. Dharma, sometimes interpreted as duty, better interpreted as moral responsibility, is really a soul finding out who he/she is and living to full capacity according to one's unique gifts. We are tricked by materialism and fear. Video brainwashes us subtly, since it can only hint at feelings while displaying a material view. I am mostly a non fiction reader, because most fiction, especially that published on a larger scale is completely like the other controlled media feeds: brainwashing for a fear based life. Yet there are increasing threads of awakening and throwing off the shackles and becoming totally human, which is a being of soul and spirit wearing a body.
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Post by sunbow on Feb 2, 2016 18:08:19 GMT -6
Most people do know that sex is not just for reproduction, but what is it for and what is it exactly? Illusion would be to say it is a physical act, because something infinity deeper happens which few would deny, but what is that? What is it really and really for and is that not being obfuscated by the media? Why does the virtualization require a sexual calibration? These are some of the most important questions we can ask ourselves. This is the essence of humanities next step in evolution. The groundwork is in 'Love, Dharma, and the Galaxy' Love, Ron Sunbow
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